New compleetly unofficial card set preview Anime card set

[Acdbrn2000]

I am planing on making an Anime based card set for fun. These are 3 from the set I just made. If anyone is interested in this set let me know and when I finish I will Post an upload to all of the cards when I finish making and coding the cards. Alos before anyone mentions it yes some cards may be a little off balanced but just think of it like the unglued series.

So far I am planning cards from
Mirrai Nikki - future diary
Death Note
Dragon Ball/z/gt/Kai
Deus ex machina DemonBane
Rurouni Kenshin - samuraiX
High School of the Dead
and possibly others, Let me know if there is a series you would like to see and even a specific character you would like.

some other cards -HotD and Deathnote ones

[AzNFrEnZy]

Some texts need to be fixed.

[Acdbrn2000]

Which text is incorrect? I am still working on the cards before I start coding them all so any advise on the text would be appreciated.

[Zethfox]

all the cost in the cards effects are incorrect....cost is normally listed as
http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/ ... eid=220581
notice in this card, there is a comma seperating normal mana cost from additional cost such as tap, followed by a colon ":"....

[Zethfox]

did you intend also to use the word "summons" and "multiply" for the HotD tokens?
this is standard token wording...
http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Searc ... spx?name=+[tokens]+[into]+[play]||type=+[tokens]+[into]+[play]||subtype=+[tokens]+[into]+[play]||text=+[tokens]+[into]+[play]

[Acdbrn2000]

Put 4 0/1 HotD Zombie creature tokens onto the battlefield.
HotD zombie tokes are black and have the text
(1b Regeneration)

and

Put Z 0/1 HotD Zombie creature tokens onto the battlefield.
Where Z is the current number of HotD Zombies multiplied by X.

would this be more correct.

[Zethfox]

yes

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Put Z 0/1 HotD Zombie creature tokens onto the battlefield.
Where Z is the current number of HotD Zombies multiplied by X.

sounds like something wotc would use for text...

the text for something like this should be something like

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Put Z 0/1 HotD black Zombie creature tokens with "{1}{b}:Regenerate" onto the battlefield.
Where Z is the current number of HotD Zombies multiplied by X.

the wotc mentions that a token should have an effect they normally just say

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with flying and "{cost}:blah"

notice here for lightining coils

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3/1 red Elemental creature tokens with haste onto the battlefield

"power/toughness color subtype maintype token with ability onto the (zone)"

[Acdbrn2000]

Thank you for your recommendations. Honestly before wagic the last time I played anything magic related was back before the idea of a legacy block was even being thought up. I think I still own some of the older sets somewhere.

[AzNFrEnZy]

wow these cards are terrible... they don't follow Magic's English whatsoever...